I think it looks lovely. Rather whimsical with the tilting hot chocolate cup. Love the bottom tier - great job on lining up the writing.

Constructive Critique Requested: Hmm, I have never understood this design but it is popular. Your bottom cake fondant is very smooth! Good job. Your border needs help. trying going slower and if you mess it up, scrape it off and do again also it is too big. Count as you go...squeeze, squeeze, release and pull. Your cup is leaning, but your knew that. I think if you use fondant below on top would be best also. Good job on your handle they are hard. Also the cake board should be 2 to 3 inches bigger. :wink:

Critique requested: Yep that cup is definatly leaning! :wink: Also the borders uneven and the rim of that cup is really thick. However your writing looks perfect and I really like the color choices.Good job! ;-D