If you want constructive criticism...I don't want to offend you, but the butterfly and the blue "mouse chaser" thing are a little distracting.
Other than that, it looks wonderful!
So far it looks great! I'm currently doing my freewebs site, too!
thanks guys.
I kind of figured that the mouse chaser, butterfly, and music would be distracting, but I added it anyways thinking that it would add some excitement since the pages are so generic.
Somernoelle, I'm not easily offended, I have tough skin. I'm a big girl. I appreciate yalls opinions.
Thanks,
Cynita
First I want to say your cakes are really beautiful. I think your "about me" and "general" sections are very informative and well written, they really convey something about who you are and what you have to offer.
I do think the Home (Welcome) section could be tightened up just a bit. I found it to be just a little too long and repetitive. It's definitely not bad, it just doesn't seem to flow quite as well as the other sections do. in my opinion.
I think its good. I actually like the butterflies. I think your pricing pages is good, as well as the calendar. I can't be bothered to read the long intro and about me pages (sorry, JMO) but i did skip right to your gallery where your work speaks for itself. For lazy readers like myself, i would make sure all the very important info is in the first paragraph.
i agree that freewebs can be a little generic, but they have tons of templates to make it a little more your own. your site looks great!
I think your web page looks great and your cakes are beautiful. ![]()
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