Very nice! Love your logo!
The only thing I would maybe suggest, your phone number/email is only on the last page - I would maybe put in on a couple of the other headers, so they don't have to "find" it.
i think it looks really good. i am concerned with there being music, i am one of those people who surfs at work, and would find it very annoying to have that pop up. While i figured out how to stop the music, there may be many who won't.
carrot cake description, you misspelled raisen (raisin)
other than these 2 small concerns, it looks fantastic!
There are some misspellings in your cake descriptions. Under your Island Dream cake, you put "pinapple" instead of pineapple. Under your Lemon Berry cake, you put "rerfreshing" instead of refreshing. I personally wouldn't capitalize the A in the middle of Lemonade, but I guess that's a matter of personal preference. Also, under the Lemonade cake description, you put "meriange" instead of meringue. Under the Death by Chocolate, you put "decadance" instead of decadence. As kimberlina25 pointed out above, under your Carrot Cake description, you put "raisens" instead of raisins. Under Java-Mocha you put "cappaccino" instead of cappuccino. That's all I found on that page, but I'll go ahead and post this and then go back and look at the other pages.
Okay, I took a look at the pricing page, and I think that you should change the part that says "All of our cakes start at $45.00" to "Our cakes begin at a minimum of $45.00" or something like that. Otherwise it sounds like no matter how big the cake is, it may be available for $45.00.
In the note below your Italian Meringue Buttercream price, you put "apperance" instead of appearance. Under your Fondant price, you have an extra "fresh" in the sentence.
Okay, I'm done proofreading. Overall I like the website. I do agree about the music. I'm not even at work, but I immediately hit the mute button on my laptop. Overall, it's a good looking website and has quite a bit of info for your customers.
Hmmm, I liked the music. Very nice song I need to look it up hehe. My husband was a music major so I have been showered with all types of music for about 8 years now so I love it and think you made a good selection that almost anyone can like no matter what genre you like! Good job hun
Yes, I totally agree with Laura102777. That "$45" would be confusing to some people.
The website is gorgeous though. You've done a great job of keeping it visual, low on all the text that can clutter it up and interesting to navigate through.
A really small point...but take out some of the exclamation points everywhere. You don't need to shout or be excited, it just seems a bit unprofessional and juvenile when there are so many. I know it's placed on phrases you want to emphasize, but it's unnecessary. 
I think it looks very professional and you have a great talent. The errors I found have already been pointed out, so great job!
Thanks guys. I knew that there were bound to be misspellings. Not only is that a weak point for me but I also had to do this bit by bit and sometimes I'd get things typed in and they would somehow vanish so I'd have to type it in ALL over.
I'll get fixing things tonight.
And yes!!!! I am excited and do use !!!!!! these often! I'll try to downsize on those too as I understand what you are saying. 
The song though...... I really want to keep it as I love browsing to music, would it help if I put a disclaimer on how to turn the sound off?
And I will take off that minuim $45. I did that because I have had people expect to pay like $20 for one of my cakes and on Duff's website I saw a disclaimer about how all his cakes start at $500.
Maybe I'll just take your advise and change the wording.
Any other comments??
Yeah, I definitely don't think you should remove the concept of your $45 minimum order, just change the wording a little bit.
And as for the music, it's not that I didn't like the song. To be honest, I didn't leave it on long enough to hear it. I watch tv and do other things while I'm looking at these things, and I don't like websites with sound unless I have done something to enable that sound (like clicking on a video clip, etc). It's up to you. I don't think people will refuse to look at your website because of the music, there just may be some who are browsing from work who might get in trouble, and some others who just generally get annoyed by music on websites.
Either way, it's a pretty good website! Congratulations!
There are some misspellings in your cake descriptions. Under your Island Dream cake, you put "pinapple" instead of pineapple. Under your Lemon Berry cake, you put "rerfreshing" instead of refreshing. I personally wouldn't capitalize the A in the middle of Lemonade, but I guess that's a matter of personal preference. Also, under the Lemonade cake description, you put "meriange" instead of meringue. Under the Death by Chocolate, you put "decadance" instead of decadence. As kimberlina25 pointed out above, under your Carrot Cake description, you put "raisens" instead of raisins. Under Java-Mocha you put "cappaccino" instead of cappuccino. That's all I found on that page, but I'll go ahead and post this and then go back and look at the other pages.
WOW! you are on fire, I can't believe I missed all those. I have heard that our brains tend to correct errors while reading, making it difficult to sometimes find typos. I don't know if that is true or not....maybe I am making that up so i don't feel embarrassed 
Okay, I'm done proofreading. Overall I like the website. I do agree about the music. I'm not even at work, but I immediately hit the mute button on my laptop. Overall, it's a good looking website and has quite a bit of info for your customers.
Holy cow! You don't fool around ~ I am definitely going to have you proofread mine.....my spelling SUCKS! I love that you took the time to check it all out.
Now, Now........if being obsessed with this site and spending hours reading articles and such makes you a dork then it make me one too, lol!!
I love it, but i dont care for the music, maybe if it was a soft tune.but your cakes are gorgeous.
GREAT website!!!
The only thing that I didn't like was that the pictures were moving way too fast for me. And in the wedding pictures, after every picture it would go back to that same pic (which could be a little annoying).
Other than that - it's awesome! I wish I could make mine look so nice!! 
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