I still can't do detailed editing because it's not compatible with the mac, but I can go to a friend's to do that or the library some time, but at least I have a domain name and a site to go along with my business cards. Now, to get this really rolling!
I'm not necessarily wanting to do weddings, but I do want to make enough to supplement DHs income so I can stay home until DS #2 gets into school.
Melissa
It's nice and homey. It has a personal touch. Good job! 
I think your site looks great.
But I wanted to point out that in the Journey' page the last line says " I am offering a better product than can be found elsewhere in design, taste, and more natural ingredients." Shouldn't it say " than CAN'T be found...." The whole idea is that you are presenting something unique. Probably just a misprint but wanted to let you know.
Good job though on the site.[/b]
Shouldn't it say " than CAN'T be found...." The whole idea is that you are presenting something unique. Probably just a misprint but wanted to let you know.[/b]
Or "..... that can't be found..."
Where's that English teacher type when you need one?
Shouldn't it say " than CAN'T be found...." The whole idea is that you are presenting something unique. Probably just a misprint but wanted to let you know.[/b]
Or "..... that can't be found..."
Where's that English teacher type when you need one?
Just to piggy back... it should read "can not." The English teacher in me is saying no contractions.
Loved the site btw. Your party kit idea is great! Good luck.
Shouldn't it say " than CAN'T be found...." The whole idea is that you are presenting something unique. Probably just a misprint but wanted to let you know.[/b]
Or "..... that can't be found..."
Where's that English teacher type when you need one?
First of all....LOVE you site and wish you much success!
As far as this particular sentence....grammatically, either will do, however, I think the key word is "better" in the sentence. I initially relate to how it's currently written and it's correct, however, if you decide to change it to the the words "that can't"...then the word "better" should also be removed. Personally, I think it's fine the way it is!
Very nice web site !! All the Best to you in your Journey !!
I j ust re read that sentence and realized I read "that" where it actually said "than". As someone else posted, it is grammatically correct the way it is. Sorry about the confusion.
BTW, I am an English teacher. Oops, we all make mistakes. I just read it wrong. And it's ok to use can't since it's an informal piece of writing.
Can not does not exist, the correct word is cannot.
Again, it's fine as is.
Good luck with your business.
I don't know.. I rather like the way she worded it. It isn't improper grammar, just not what is typically seen. I think people use the word "that" way too much.
Just an opinion, of course.
Holly
p.s. Good job on the site, by the way.
Great website!!! I also like the journey page. Good luck in your new adventure..!!!
I also love the kid party idea!! Wow what a blast it is going to be!!
Wow, came back and lots of discussion! Well, it is worded correctly, but it wasn't initially, my DH found that mistake, but if it's too difficult to make out, I should reword it so it's clearer than the mud it is now.
I keep tweaking as I think and I know there's stuff I've missed and things I want to add. but I'm glad to see the overall feeling is that it's good. I have to admit, I was holding my breath for what indydebi had to say because I KNOW she'll be honest and that is what I want - HONESTY because if it's bad, I should KNOW... conversely, if it's goo, I want to know that too.
I will put up a page giving more details on pricing and the servings each cake makes just to avoid some confusion and questions.
I'm SURE no one will ever order cupcakes from me, but that's fine... I should put in there too somehwere that if someone buys a large order - like a cake and supplemental cupcakes, I will discount the cupcakes as long as their design is simple.
I'm also still not sure about the pricing of the party kit. I put there needs to be a minimum of 5 kids now because it would SOOOO not be worth it for one or two kids.
I wish I could add music - I'd play Sweet Melissa! LOL
OK, gotta finish dinner! Oh, and it already generated 2 cakes from my Moms Club, so that's something considering it's been up for less than 24 hours!
Melissa
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