The Cake Passed- Please Critique

Decorating By nglez09 Updated 5 Mar 2007 , 1:34am by Melvira

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nglez09 Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 5:25am
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Thanks everyone; it all went very well. I learned a lot from my past experience and through your advice I was able to make something proficient.

I ended up doing:

Mocha/Espresso chocolate cake w/ whipped ganache

White chocolate with whipped cream filling and fresh strawberries

Carrot cake with cream cheese icing

Dark chocolate cake with chocolate cream cheese icing and chocolate chunks

Thanks again everyone. I'd really appreciate your HONEST and SINCERE critique on it! I'm really not looking for compliments.

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rezzygirl Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 5:35am
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Wow! You're really coming along!! I know you're not looking for compliments but I am impressed. My only critique is next time tap down your icing points on your borders. It will look more professional and consistent. Just tap your finger into a little powdered sugar then tap the points down. Nice job!

-Rezzy

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nglez09 Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 6:16am
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Thanks Rezzy, I appreciate it! I tried to do that but it just pushed it in on some of the things. I kept saying, "This next one won't have a little tip" and it would.

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moydear77 Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 6:19am
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Way to go! It looks great. The only thing i would do as suggested is tap down the points on your border. Otherwise good for you!

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nglez09 Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 6:31am
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Thanks Moy.

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nglez09 Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 6:42am
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Please tell me what else I should do to make it better or any tips. Don't sugarcoat it. icon_biggrin.gif I really want to get better.
LL

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2sdae Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 7:00am
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It is a really pretty cake but I did notice you need to work on your string work, and is that cornelli inside of them? Ans I would make the border more uniform and less peaks to them. You can tamp them down when crusted with the tip of your finger or a paint brush.

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kelleym Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 7:05am
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Instead of the dots (which have to be tamped down) for a border, have you considered a bead border? There is a tutorial here. It says to use tip 3, but I like a 7 or 8 for an elegant bead border, and sometimes I use a 12 to imitate the look of fondant balls.

http://www.wilton.com/decorating/basic/beads.cfm

I agree with 2sdae, work on your stringwork! icon_smile.gif

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amberhoney Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 7:19am
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is this the cake you were wondering about the flower spikes for? It's lovely. And refreshing that someone wants 'honest' opinions. Your fondant is very smooth! Depending on budget could you add a few more flowers next time to cover the join between cakes? Other than that it's a really nice cake. I have yet to master those pesky pearls too so you're not alone!

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JoAnnB Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 7:22am
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Looks pretty good, the roses worked. Others have made suggestions about the border. I have found if you pipe the beads from the side, it is easier to hide the points. Pipe it almost like a shell, only without as much movement.

To get even garlands, it helps to cut a paper template out of parchment or waxed paper. You can mark the garlands so that they are even around the layer.

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jules06 Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 12:16pm
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Hi, I think you have done a wonderful job thumbs_up.gif
Look forward to seeing more of your cakes

julie icon_biggrin.gif

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2sdae Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 1:04pm
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It has a very nice look, good over all appeal and simplicity to it. Very nice. icon_biggrin.gif

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lsawyer Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 1:05pm
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This is such a pretty cake--simple elegance!
I have a hard time eyeballing stringwork/garlands, so now I rely on Wilton's plastic garland marker. It's worth every dime to me.

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Pootchi Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 1:48pm
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Very elegant cake! I too think you need to work on your garland and border, but other wise,it looks great!
You don't mind if I keep the idea for a future cake?
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Granpam Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 2:01pm
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Very elegant. I too agree need to have more roses to hide the seams and your border. My iWI said the key to not getting points is to release your pressure on your bag before lifti it away from the ball. I still have trouble sometimes and have to tap points down and I have been decorating for six years.

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m0use Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 2:04pm
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I love the colors, they match the roses quite well.
I am guesing from the picture that those are regular size roses. Maybe try making this cake again but with tea roses or mini roses instead, it might help with the elegance of the cake for next time.

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SILVERCAT Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 2:34pm
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After all the help it came out AWESOME! Love the look adn I think everyone has weak spots! Next time will be better!

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tiggy2 Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 2:55pm
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It looks great nglez! But as others have suggested you should use a garland marker for the swags and release the pressure before the lifting the tip on your bead border. I agree that sweetheart roses may have been a better choice for the size of the tiers but you executed your plan very well... You should be very proud of yourself!!!

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Melvira Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 2:55pm
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Awesome! I love it! Don't worry about that stringwork, with just a little more practice you will be eyeballing it flawlessly! It's not easy and you are really on the right track! You know... people mentioned more roses, but you know what would look neat instead? A little greenery. I think flowers don't look exactly 'right' without leaves or something, and it is great filler, it would make the flower area look fuller. I know when I do frosting roses I use a ton of frosting leaves, so perhaps this would good with some leaves or even leaves and baby's breath around the flowers. It really is nice though. I am so proud of you!

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bethola Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 3:11pm
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GREAT JOB! I agree with Melvira however on the leaves and baby's breath for a filler. It can cover "a multitude of sins"! LOLL Did you end up using the spikes? I really couldn't tell from the pic.

Beth in KY

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emmascakes Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 3:30pm
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Well done you - this looks very nice, good colours and lovely smooth surface to the cakes. My suggestion would be to ice the board and put a ribbon round it to get an extra-professional look. Keep up the good work!

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nglez09 Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 6:54pm
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Thanks everyone. I'll keep your suggestions in mind for next time. thumbs_up.gif Thanks for the link KellyM; I appreciate it.

Would the tapping down of the little points still be applicable for royal icing? (which is what I was using). It seemed extra difficult with royal in comparison to butter cream.

Thanks also for the suggestion about the roses, I agree with you guys. The hostess went out and bought the flowers and so that was why I had to use those and was limited as to how many as well.

Once again, thanks for your honest opinions- I can tell you guys really want me to keep improving!thumbs_up.gif

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cocakedecorator Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 7:23pm
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I think it looks great. I agree with everyone about the flowers needing some greenary and also to use a marker or guide for the swags. I still have a hard time with those. I like to measure and use a toothpick to mark my points.

Not sure about the royal icing and tapping it down, unless you did it right away since royal dries fairly fast. I would use BC for that next time.

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nglez09 Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 8:45pm
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Thanks cocake. Would you cut the leaves and stick them in or stick the rose in w/ the green attached?

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lsawyer Posted 4 Mar 2007 , 9:32pm
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You can dip your finger or brush in cornstarch to tap down RI points.

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Melvira Posted 5 Mar 2007 , 1:34am
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It would totally depend on where the leaf is in relation to the bud. I am betting you would end up having to put the leaf in seperately so that the leaf is close to the flower itself. Try fooling around with it in practice!!

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