Birthday Sheetcake

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1/4 sheetcake decorated in b/c. The roses are fondant. All critiques are welcome.

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critique subgroup member: This is so pretty! I love the design and the colors. The icing is so smooth and the borders are very neat. My only critique would be that the letters in "Maury" look a little crowded. Otherwise, I can't find a thing to critique. Fantastic cake!

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Critique Subgroup Member: I agree with jadak--I don't have anything to critique on this one. The only thing I might have changed would be making the roses a little lighter like the icing. Your borders look great.

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Critique subgroup member: You know the composition is wonderful as is the execution. You sure can pipe! I just think the black is too heavy for the desing and the fact it is not carried out anywhere is bothers me.

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Critique group member: Absolutely adorable! The design is so fresh and femine! Critiquewise I agree that the roses should have been lighter and more similar to the pink icing and I also agree that the black line seems to heavy and stark.

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critique subgroup member: i can see where others say the roses would have been nice a lighter color, but actually like the black it anchors your eye to the cake in a way, without it it would still be a great cake but it makes everything around it more subtle and delicate to me

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critique subgroup member: wow- this is just perfect. :) I love the black contrasting the other colors- it makes everything stand out. Very vibrant

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critique subgroup member: Love this cake! the icing is so incredibly smooth! I like the addition of the black, I think it makes the other colors pop! who'd have thought?

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critique group member. Lovely design Unike some I like the black i think it makes it pop ! Only thing I see is a few of the letters on the message are a bit to close to each other