Deep Breath...123..here We Go!

Business By sillymoo84 Updated 13 Jun 2010 , 3:42pm by sillymoo84

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carmijok Posted 13 Jun 2010 , 2:53pm
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The issues that I saw have been addressed except this one thing you might consider, and it's not even that big of a deal. Here is your copy:

Specialising in wedding cake design, our desire is to create beautiful and unique wedding cakes and celebration cakes for all romantic occasions.

I would insert the word 'your' in front of 'all romantic occasions'. Just personalizes it a bit. 'all your romantic occasions' . After all, someone may have a completely different idea of what a romantic occasion is for them!
Regardless, it works either way! Your photos are quite lovely and everything looks good so far. Are you going to be able to click on your photos to enlarge them?
It's a process isn't it? thumbs_up.gif

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sillymoo84 Posted 13 Jun 2010 , 2:56pm
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hey i know about the menu thing, but i can only have it right or left, for some reason! icon_sad.gif I may add in another page or space the tabs out a bit.

Re the dreaded word bespoke... I have taken this out of most places, but left it in some, as it seems to be the word to use over here with wedding planners etc so i need to appeal to the same market. the stresses eh?

dreading the launch of it now, in case something is spelt wrong or i delete everything!! icon_smile.gif

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deej Posted 13 Jun 2010 , 3:24pm
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Your home page copy reads:
We deliver wedding cakes across the Southern Spain, Marbella, and Gibraltar.
I would suggest you remove "the".

Actually, Marbella and Gibraltar are in southern Spain. Perhaps change the sentence to, "We deliver wedding cakes across southern Spain including Marbella and Gibraltar."

Your cakes and photos are gorgeous. Best of luck.

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sillymoo84 Posted 13 Jun 2010 , 3:32pm
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webster - perfect!! could not think how to word it#!! thank you!

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sillymoo84 Posted 13 Jun 2010 , 3:42pm
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re enlarging the photos, not at the moment, one I post the winter collection, then I will open a gallery where the viewer can do so, Otherwise I am duplicating images, and I only want to display the ones professionally shot!

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