Need some advice on this? how does it sound?? has to be 50 words

Yummy Choo creates fabulous cupcakes & cakes, which are lovingly
homemade & individually hand decorated!
Based in Croydon, Surrey we cater for any special occasion or event &
each order can be customised to your liking. We are highly recommended
and competitve on prices.
Check out www.yummychoo.co.uk

Sounds good to me!
I'm wondering if which should be that?
And, to be picky, maybe put a comma after Surrey?

hm maybe get rid of the which are ?

Try this:

Fabulous Yummy Choo cupcakes lovingly homemade & individually hand decorated! Join us in Croydon, Surrey where we cater to your special occasion/event. You'll love our customised orders.
Highly recommended and competitve prices, come check us out!
www.yummychoo.co.uk

thats sounds really good! I am a home baker so where it is the join us or come check us out, should i just say Based in Croydon... or check out our website.. wat u think?

Here you go :0)

Fabulous Yummy Choo cupcakes lovingly homemade & individually hand decorated! Call for your appointment today in Croydon, Surrey where catering to your special occasion/event is our delight. You'll love our customised orders. Highly recommended and competitve prices, check us out at www.yummychoo.co.uk !

thats cake mom that sounds perfect. Which picture do you think is the best out of these below???? to go with the wording for the magazine.

You are most welcome!
I like number 2 best.
But number 1 works too :0)

Good Luck!

i like the first pic

I like #1 best.

I like #3.

What kind of magazine is it? If it is a wedding magazine, then definitely picture number one works best. Number two looks great for any kind of general ad.

# 1 looks great!!

thanks guys! Ive submitted the 1st picture!