critique group member. He is adorable and yes that is alot of fur piping. I am not sure I like the 2 at the top I would maybe have put the 2 on the present Maybe sticking up from the bow.
Critique group member: Ok to me it looks like his body is out of proportion, for instance his feet and arms are huge but his middle and legs are very small. Also I have to say that it does not really look like he is holding the present, not sure how to fix that though.Positives I love the gift the colors are very fresh and your writing looks great.
Love the fur ! Nice job ! :)
critique group member. He is adorable and yes that is alot of fur piping. I am not sure I like the 2 at the top I would maybe have put the 2 on the present Maybe sticking up from the bow.
Critique group member: Ok to me it looks like his body is out of proportion, for instance his feet and arms are huge but his middle and legs are very small. Also I have to say that it does not really look like he is holding the present, not sure how to fix that though.Positives I love the gift the colors are very fresh and your writing looks great.