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Better...I like the "two services" panel, it explains the different options more clearly although the copy and text layout still needs work. The more I see this, though, the more I think that a trifold is not the right presentation. If I were designing this, the three inside panels would be part of the same design element that integrates the explanation of the differences between the services with the description and pictures of the services themselves. You can't fit that on one panel of a trifold.

It's also a little odd that you are attaching your name to the cheapest (or "value") collection instead of your custom cakes, which I assume are your flagship product.

Plus your URL is misspelled on the cover.