I'll be honest and hope it's not redundant. (And props to you for having the guts to post and ask for honest feedback. I've had a site for a year and have yet to do that - I'm still tweaking it, but I'm getting close!)
Ok, I was a bit floored by how much you are able to charge for your cakes (more power to you though!
) but more importantly, I was shocked when I clicked on the portfolio and saw Wilton class cakes rather than the big 3 or 4 tiered wedding cakes that would cost at least $550. As proud as we are of our class cakes, I would remove them from the gallery. They are lovely and well done but those are obviously not what you want the public to associate you with.
You need to put your show stopping cakes right on the front page. I know when I set up my site, I uploaded pictures as I was creating it but I'm sure if you are charging as much as you are then you must have a slew of big ones under your belt so I would make them the focus. At $9 - $19 a serving, anything less is distracting. (If, for some reason, the cakes that are pictured are as fancy or elaborate as you have made, then that is a whole different story....)
I don't want to re-iterate what the others have said but I also felt your page would benefit from less text, reducing/moving the 'about me' pages to the back, use more positive phrasing, and ditch the cheap-skate/scam-attracting guarantee.
When I read your thing about only taking clients you like, it genuinley sounded like people had to basically 'apply' to get you to take their order and then see if they are accepted. I refuse to work with bridezillas, so I get where you are going with that but is that truly what you mean or how you want the clients to interpret it? (btw, did anyone else get this feeling or was I misunderstanding? If I am way off about this, I applologize).
** I did, however, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE your husbands flavors names for the cakes - they are awesome! And I think the picture of you at the top is great - very cute and professional looking. I am assuming you are licensed so I would toot that horn too since most of us struggle to achieve that milestone.
HTH and feel free to come along and pick mine apart when I post it.
I shall also have to locate my big girl panties, lol. (They were hiding for a while but it's been sink or swim lately and ya can't swim in this business without 'em!)