Looks good!! Love the way the paper looks. :)

great job on the notebook paper, the lines are perfectly spaced which adds such realism! you might have added some texture on the white of the book to appear like pages of the book. I agree that a title or something else should have been added to the cover of the book. Again the cake board should have been covered as all that lacy design distracts from the cake!

the paper is amazing. nice clean lines. The book itself needs something.. a title or something.

Critiqe group member: First off that board is awful! Seconmd I l would have like to have seen some sort of design on the book. However the positives are that the note book looks perfect, It capures the sort of uneven color a notebook usually has.

Your paper tablet is lovely, would wish for more on the book cake such as a title or decoration, seems sort of plain to me. You may want to think through where your seems will end up such as the paper in the book. Second cake so I won't mention the ugly cake board. Good second cake but I believe your first was more interesting.

Critique Group Member: Awesome job! I also feel that making indentions in the sides of the paper and the book will help make it look more realistic. Very cool!

2nd cake ever... or 2nd fondant cake?

2nd cake :)