Website Advices Please!!

Business By TheItalianBaker Updated 12 Jul 2014 , 12:23pm by TheItalianBaker

TheItalianBaker Posted 12 Jul 2014 , 3:01am
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That's my website, I still need to upgrade it but I need some opinion first.. 

what do you think?

 

http://irene-oh.wix.com/sugartreats

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CWR41 Posted 12 Jul 2014 , 8:20am
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Nice pics.  It reads like English is not your primary language (several grammar and spelling errors).

AZCouture Posted 12 Jul 2014 , 8:24am
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Originally Posted by CWR41 
 

Nice pics.  It reads like English is not your primary language (several grammar and spelling errors).

It is a darling site, very colorful without being too loud....and there are most definitely some spelling and grammatical errors to attend to. But that's easy to fix!

TheNerdyBaker Posted 12 Jul 2014 , 9:20am
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The one main thing, design wise, that stands out to me is that the main content on each of your pages is all written on a semi-transparent background.  This allows all your colorful sprinkles to peek through and make it a little rough to read the actual text.

 

So if it were me, I would make those boxes either a lot less transparent, or solid pink.

 

Other than that, the grammar and wording should be taken care of like mentioned above.

 

All in all though, it's a very nice site.  Definitely a lot more professional than some I have seen o.O

TheItalianBaker Posted 12 Jul 2014 , 12:23pm
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Nice pics.  It reads like English is not your primary language (several grammar and spelling errors).

Yes, English is not my primary language! I'm gonna force my husband to check every single world today lol

Thank you!

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