Marks Cakery Posted 5 Jul 2013 , 7:51pm
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I am starting to dabble in 3D toppers and here is my first "frog". Does it look remotely like a frog to you??

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Annabakescakes Posted 5 Jul 2013 , 7:53pm
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Remotely ;-) Eyes should be on top and tongue a bit shorter and coming from the middle. Arms a bit more centered, maybe? Mouth wider.

bct806 Posted 5 Jul 2013 , 7:56pm
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Remotely ;-) Eyes should be on top and tongue a bit shorter and coming from the middle. Arms a bit more centered, maybe? Mouth wider.

I agree. I can tell it is a frog but if the eyes were higher it would really make a huge difference. 

Marks Cakery Posted 5 Jul 2013 , 8:08pm
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kakeladi Posted 5 Jul 2013 , 8:09pm
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I agree with the others,You are off to a good start:)

 Besides putting the eyes higher, make balls of green & put the eyes on them to make them 'bulge' out.

Marks Cakery Posted 5 Jul 2013 , 8:22pm
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Thank you for the advice and I have taken all of it and this is what I came up with..

 

dawnybird Posted 5 Jul 2013 , 8:22pm
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That's definitely better! The eyes are going to have the biggest impact. Do what the others suggested and I think you'll have your frog!

dawnybird Posted 5 Jul 2013 , 8:23pm
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That's definitely better! The eyes are going to have the biggest impact. Do what the others suggested and I think you'll have your frog!


Oops! I must have been typing when you posted the last photos. That's it! You've got it!

DeliciousDesserts Posted 5 Jul 2013 , 8:36pm
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AThe shape of his head is a bit off. More oval & squatty. Always helps me to bring up some image.

milkmaid42 Posted 5 Jul 2013 , 9:43pm

It certainly is looking more "froggy". I would be inclined to make the hind legs thicker at the thighs as that is where his power is located. And I agree with delicious desserts. His head could use a little :"squatifying" and his cheeks a little more pronounced. All in all, you're getting there. Looking at a picture is the key, but then an artist always has his own interpretation.

 

Jan

bct806 Posted 5 Jul 2013 , 10:58pm

Much better. Great job!

annabananana Posted 6 Jul 2013 , 12:25am

AI would say make the arms skinnier and the legs bulkier and squish the head a bit. Make mouth wider.

kaylawaylalayla Posted 6 Jul 2013 , 2:30am

AYou are really good at taking direction and criticism. Go you!

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