Pleas Help With Tag Line

Business By veronica720 Updated 27 Aug 2009 , 12:35am by veronica720

veronica720 Posted 26 Aug 2009 , 4:16pm
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Should I even have one? I registered my business a few weeks ago and I have been debating this for a while, so now I want your opinions.

Name is Kitty Kakes

Does the tag line need to be on the logo also? I had a few ideas but still need help.

Custom cakes to make any occasion Pur-fect (too long?)

Your Pur-fect cake

I don't know!!! And no it doesn't have to have the pur-fect thing, I just thought it was cute. There will be a cat on the logo design though.

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veronica720 Posted 26 Aug 2009 , 4:17pm
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Darn I can't spell......sorry!!

cylstrial Posted 26 Aug 2009 , 7:08pm
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You could do a tag line if you want.

Thanks for calling Kitty Kakes where we've got the pur-fect cake for you!

Or you could just say Thanks for calling Kitty Kakes. This is Kitty speaking, how may I help you?

Or...thanks for calling Kitty Kakes where if you buy a dozen cookies, you get 2 free. This is Kitty speaking, how may I help you?

Lots of things you could say or do. Good luck!

globalgatherings Posted 26 Aug 2009 , 7:23pm
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Veronica, I love the name and the use of Purr-fect in the tag line. I think you should use two r's though

Kelly

veronica720 Posted 26 Aug 2009 , 7:29pm
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Yes definately two r's

any ideas?

it's not my name or nickname. The two k's are for my daughters names and using 'Kitty' is for my dear sweet best furry friend EVER, that I recently lost in a tragic accident. (still cry when I think of him, like now)

so anyways, ideas?

this-mama-rocks Posted 26 Aug 2009 , 7:36pm
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KittyKakes
The purr-fect creation for your celebration!

globalgatherings Posted 26 Aug 2009 , 7:42pm
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Well, I like your Custom cakes line and I don't think its too long. I'm Global Gatherings, catering foods from around the world. And it's all in my logo. Been in business for 9 years( so I think its worked good). There is a member on cc, I think his name is Mike( not sure), but I know its a man and I have seen him come up with really good slogans and tag lines for people. I like the way he thinks. He'll probably show up here soon. HEY, MR. MARKETING GENIOUS, where are are you???

globalgatherings Posted 26 Aug 2009 , 7:44pm
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Oooo, I really like that last one that mama came up with and I love the rhyme. GREAT!!!

Kelly

this-mama-rocks Posted 26 Aug 2009 , 8:23pm
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I think I would edit "your celebration" to "any celebration"

HTH!

veronica720 Posted 26 Aug 2009 , 11:06pm
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Oooh, I like that one

veronica720 Posted 27 Aug 2009 , 12:35am
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Anyone else have a suggestion?

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