Started it about a month or 2 ago, not quite finish, but check it out and give me some pointers. It's nothing really fancy, just tried to work with the freewebs templates that are offered.

Thanks,
Cynita

Ooohhhh.........
www.freewebs.com/desirabledelight

your website looks great but there is a "blue thing" that keeps coming across the page that kinda distracts me from reading, etc..... just my 2 cents worth......

If you want constructive criticism...I don't want to offend you, but the butterfly and the blue "mouse chaser" thing are a little distracting.
Other than that, it looks wonderful!

Hi Cynita,

I think it looks good but I did find a spelling error on your About Me page. 3rd paragraph down...the word "workng." Obviously should be "working." Just thought I would let you know!!

I agree about the butterflies. I would also get rid of the music. Other than that, it looks pretty good.

So far it looks great! I'm currently doing my freewebs site, too!

thanks guys.
I kind of figured that the mouse chaser, butterfly, and music would be distracting, but I added it anyways thinking that it would add some excitement since the pages are so generic.
Somernoelle, I'm not easily offended, I have tough skin. I'm a big girl. I appreciate yalls opinions.

Thanks,
Cynita

jennifer, be sure to share it. Can't wait to see it.

First I want to say your cakes are really beautiful. I think your "about me" and "general" sections are very informative and well written, they really convey something about who you are and what you have to offer.

I do think the Home (Welcome) section could be tightened up just a bit. I found it to be just a little too long and repetitive. It's definitely not bad, it just doesn't seem to flow quite as well as the other sections do. in my opinion.

I think its good. I actually like the butterflies. I think your pricing pages is good, as well as the calendar. I can't be bothered to read the long intro and about me pages (sorry, JMO) but i did skip right to your gallery where your work speaks for itself. For lazy readers like myself, i would make sure all the very important info is in the first paragraph.

I agree with everyone the bouncing line and butterflies aren't needed. Otherwise all is good

the site looks really nice

i agree that freewebs can be a little generic, but they have tons of templates to make it a little more your own. your site looks great!

Thanks everyone for your inputs, I really appreciate it. I'll soon be making some revisions.


Thanks,
Cynita

I think your web page looks great and your cakes are beautiful.