Quick! Need Help With This Design!

Decorating By diamondsonblackvelvet13 Updated 12 Aug 2008 , 4:50pm by diamondsonblackvelvet13

diamondsonblackvelvet13 Posted 11 Aug 2008 , 10:41pm
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I have this cake due tomorrow. I can't figure out what is wrong with this design. It's missing something.

The name of the clinic is Cactus Health Clinic and the cactus floating in there is their "logo."
LL

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foxymomma521 Posted 11 Aug 2008 , 10:44pm
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Maybe more red stars? (in the empty white area)

suz3 Posted 11 Aug 2008 , 10:52pm
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Maybe the cactus several more times across the bottom. Too much white.

playingwithsugar Posted 11 Aug 2008 , 10:53pm
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Yes, the white area is way too empty.

Maybe a stethoscope and a bandaid?

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TantalizingTreats Posted 11 Aug 2008 , 10:56pm
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what about 3 cactus instead of 1

Swede-cakes Posted 11 Aug 2008 , 10:57pm
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I see nice symmetry in your design. Four corners stars, center placement of the Heroes of Healthcare sign at the top, and the two lines of text are almost identical in length.

Maybe it's not missing anything. If you have the option of changing things a bit, and not just add more for the sake of more, what about this? To keep the symmetry, place the cactus in the center of the cake with a text line above and below it? You'll eliminate the big blank spaces at the bottom corners. The area around the cactus won't seem as empty this way.

Just my thoughts. hth! I bet the Heroes of Healthcare are really going to enjoy this cake! Good luck!



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diamondsonblackvelvet13 Posted 11 Aug 2008 , 11:05pm
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Like this? What about cactus' on the top corners?
LL

diamondsonblackvelvet13 Posted 11 Aug 2008 , 11:09pm
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I found it! Thank you SO much! A combo of everyone's ideas! CC ROCKS!
LL

kakeladi Posted 11 Aug 2008 , 11:39pm
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Isn't it wonderful that we now have this forum to help us when we come up blank?
Your final draft is great! Looking forward to seeing your finished cake.

foxymomma521 Posted 11 Aug 2008 , 11:40pm
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perfect!! icon_smile.gif

cakemommy Posted 12 Aug 2008 , 4:11am
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Love it!!!!!!! Spatially, it is beautiful. Well balanced!!!


Amy

diamondsonblackvelvet13 Posted 12 Aug 2008 , 12:21pm
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Ok! I got it done! Thank you call SO much for your help! The top is a buttercream transfer. The little rounded area at the top says "Heroes of Healthcare"

I am going to have to practice these BCT...getting harder to smooth.
LL

bambuf Posted 12 Aug 2008 , 12:44pm
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You really did a beautiful job! icon_smile.gif

cakemommy Posted 12 Aug 2008 , 4:22pm
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Oh my! It's fantastic! You did that out of a FBCT?????? Your writing is fabulous! Oh, this is perfect!!!! BEAUTIFUL!!!!! Not to mention the colors!! Gorgeous!!!!!!!

Amy

Ldydesignr Posted 12 Aug 2008 , 4:46pm
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You did a great job! You should be so proud. icon_biggrin.gifthumbs_up.gif

diamondsonblackvelvet13 Posted 12 Aug 2008 , 4:50pm
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Wow guys! You're making me blush! icon_redface.gif I've done the FBCT before, but not one this detailed. I am just glad it's over...maybe I can sneak in a nap.

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