How Does This Sound?

Lounge By Katie-Bug Updated 27 Mar 2008 , 3:31pm by Katie-Bug

Katie-Bug Posted 26 Mar 2008 , 9:18pm
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I am working on my brochures for my personal chef business and I am needing someone to tell me what they think of this. It will be on the inside of my brochures.

What does Personal Chef Services include?
What are the benefits?
What if I have food allergies?
What if I am on a reduced calorie or low-cholesterol diet?

Personal Chef Services means that I come into your home and prepare healthy custom prepared meals for your family. Meals are either prepared for consumption that night, or left in the your refrigerator with heating instructions. While shopping for your meal, I will also pick up additional groceries you may need. If someone in your family does have a restricted diet, we will work with you to create meals that suit your needs.

Is there anything I need to add or change? Thanks so much!!

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Doug Posted 26 Mar 2008 , 10:19pm
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consider statements instead of questions as your headings and phrasing them so they easily start each item on a list.

Your personal chef will....
> whip up new creations to tantalize your tastebuds
> fill the fridge to bursting with delectable delights
> simplify food shopping to a quick trip to your family's refrigerator.
> reduce the grind of cooking to a dash of fresh ground pepper

You'll benefit by...
> not having to cook!
> not having to ponder "what should I make now??"
> having a variety of tasty meal
> getting the foods you like and want

Your allergies are under control with
> our custom created dishes
> our careful planning
> our use of the best ingredients

Your diet won't seem like "DIE" spelled with a "t" when we
> create 5 star dishes any gourmand would love
> surprise you with decadently sinful guilt-free snack.

and so forth

thedessertdiva Posted 26 Mar 2008 , 10:52pm
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Oooo, Doug...makes me want to be a personal chef just so I can use your ideas in a brochure... icon_lol.gif

Katie-Bug Posted 27 Mar 2008 , 3:31pm
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AAwww!! I love it!! Love it!!! You are so wonderful thank you!!!!

When I finally get them finsihed I will have to share them with everyone!! I am getting so excited!!

Thank you a million!!

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