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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 4:42 am  Reply with quoteBack to top

I need to make some Alligator cookies for a soccer team. And I cannot get the perspective right (legs are wrong, the mouth...). What am I doing wrong? This is such a bad cookie, that I am ashamed to posted here. Any help with improvements? Does anyone have some pics of this cutter shape cookie?
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 4:45 am  Reply with quoteBack to top

I think it's the shape of the cutter itself that's bugging you. I don't know if you have time to get a different one, but there's an alligator in the wilton plastic animal cutter set that has a better shape.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 4:58 am  Reply with quoteBack to top

I agree with Texas Rose that it's the shape that looks wrong, but it might help if you put the eyes up higher near the top of the cookie and maybe a bit further back to elongate the nose bit. The shape of the cookie looks more like a dinasour. Good Luck Smile
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 5:08 am  Reply with quoteBack to top

Maybe you could pinch his jaws so that they are longer. I think it is the short mouth that makes him look more like a lizard. Aligators have long, more narrow jaws. I like the way you did his back. I think you have done a good job, its just the mouth area on the cutter that is throwing you off.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 5:13 am  Reply with quoteBack to top

I'd set his eye farther back. Also when outlining/drawing in the details, I'd make the jaw longer and outline leg muscles so that the feet aren't just stumps.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 5:13 am  Reply with quoteBack to top

God points here, I am currently drawing and drawing on paper some your ideas. I agree the eye should be higher. You meant pinch the nose before baking? Or making more deeper opening with piping?
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 5:20 am  Reply with quoteBack to top

I'd pinch the nose before baking to give you the more natural jawline that the cutter doesn't. Smile
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 6:12 am  Reply with quoteBack to top

Thank you guys for your help. It looks good on the paper now. I see I was way off Very Happy
I am actually going to draw a soccer ball on him as well. Looks good on paper, now it's time to bake....and will see Laughing
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 6:25 am  Reply with quoteBack to top

You might also make his body a little shorter. Alligator bodies are long and low. Check out this cookie cutter for a better idea of what I'm trying to say:

http://www.thecookiecuttershop.....ri11.shtml
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 6:34 am  Reply with quoteBack to top

Something I had to learn over time was that I didn't need to always pipe to the edge of the cookie. This cutter is not a great shape, so you may have to adjust your piping to get the look of the gater.
I hope that makes sense.

Happy baking! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 6:46 am  Reply with quoteBack to top

ok bear with me this is very crude............but how about like this??? You can see that the body itself is much thinner (you don't have to ice the whole cookie) and then make the legs come out from the body. This is a clip art image similar to your cookie overlayed onto your cookie.
Like I said "bear with me" lol
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 3:17 pm  Reply with quoteBack to top

KHalstead wrote:
ok bear with me this is very crude............but how about like this??? You can see that the body itself is much thinner (you don't have to ice the whole cookie) and then make the legs come out from the body. This is a clip art image similar to your cookie overlayed onto your cookie.
Like I said "bear with me" lol


Hmm...that is so different, now I see my gator is pretty fat Laughing
I will post my result Friday. Thanks for help!!!
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 6:31 pm  Reply with quoteBack to top

Can't wait to see what happens with your cookie!
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 7:15 pm  Reply with quoteBack to top

I would like to update my new try of the alligator. Oh, I think it does look like gator now Laughing Laughing
I was using the idea of KHalstead, when she put the picture over my cookie, it just hit my head! It is not my best cookie, but at least it is alligator.....or I hope Confused

PS I do have one other trouble cutter "Mermaid", maybe I will bug you next time I bake.
Thank you all for the ideas and help!
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 7:47 pm  Reply with quoteBack to top

that looks a lot better.. and yes.. it does look like a gator now.. Great job.. =D
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